ok, major advice here.
You are not making a blockbuster movie which people are going to pay to see.
When people pay to see a movie they are more inclined to sit through 5 minutes of opening credits.
You need to think of your audience.
I look through most the flashes here, and there are alot of really bad ones. So I watch as much as I can before making a quick judgement on whether it's worth my time and effort to continue watching or to just close it and move on.
So I found your extremely slow intro sequence to be pointless.
It did nothing to set a mood or theme to your flash, it was just clouds and really really slow text.
Why include it? It achieves nothing other than annoy the viewer.
Anyway, the rest of the flash was ok.
For sure my opening credits is a little bit too slow and boring (1m00 lol). Thanks for your comments!
You get my 5 for the next month at least
That was a waste of my attention.
I could have been spending my time better by staring at this piece of dust on my desk.
The biggest NG event in newgrounds history.
if you miss it, you will probably kill yourself. seriously.
That's a loooong pitch.
I'm pretty emo and even I found it funny.
Although My Chemical Romance are pure trash.
So that emo kid did indeed need to die for having such bad music taste.
I can't believe i'm actually grinding...
I'll get that epic mount soon!!!
Hehe, it won't be WoW without the grind, eh? :P But at least you won't have to kill 10,000 or them. 8-10 wolves isn't so bad IMO. Thanks for the review! :)
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