Munkah's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jim Banana]

Advice

ok, major advice here.

You are not making a blockbuster movie which people are going to pay to see.
When people pay to see a movie they are more inclined to sit through 5 minutes of opening credits.

You need to think of your audience.
I look through most the flashes here, and there are alot of really bad ones. So I watch as much as I can before making a quick judgement on whether it's worth my time and effort to continue watching or to just close it and move on.

So I found your extremely slow intro sequence to be pointless.
It did nothing to set a mood or theme to your flash, it was just clouds and really really slow text.
Why include it? It achieves nothing other than annoy the viewer.

Anyway, the rest of the flash was ok.

Archaein responds:

For sure my opening credits is a little bit too slow and boring (1m00 lol). Thanks for your comments!

[26.05.06]

Thanks

That was a waste of my attention.

I could have been spending my time better by staring at this piece of dust on my desk.

NullZilla responds:

The biggest NG event in newgrounds history.

if you miss it, you will probably kill yourself. seriously.

[SC Saturday Night Live #6]

I like

Finally someone else makes stupid random movies!!!
Aim to make it longer next time.

You got my five.

Skeik responds:

lol, yeah, could be a lil longer.

[Depresidio 2]

effective

Simple, yet it was well done.
I disagree with the previous review about it needing more violence.
That wouldn't have helped the flash at all. It would have been out of place.
Plot wise, it wasn't great. No real story other than a depressed kid wandering around and finally fighting and defeating his demon. But that was fine.
Nice work.

Kraken17 responds:

It had no need to be violent, though the war in my SOUL is indeed violent...
Just kidding. I'll try to make a better plot next time. thank you!

[Merry Christmas all]

Started Well

It started so well...and then we were just left with a static image and some flashy lights.
I guess you got bored pretty quickly while making this Flash.

Penguinated responds:

Nope I had intented to make it very very short when I started because I wanted it done before Christmas and in the end I still have a day to spare. =)

[T.R.F. Chapter2]

Pretty Interesting

I didn't watch the first chapter because chapter2 should be able to stand up on its own merits.
I have to say that despite some minor flaws it was an interesting flash.
Why would there be remote controlled grammaphone style record players in the future? Although it is your view of the future, so it's not necessarily wrong.
The face wasn't really that well drawn. Use referance in future.
That will help alot.
Your choice of music suited the flash well.

Over all, a pretty good movie.

critiqUe109 responds:

Well I gave the thought that this commander was a somwhat classy guy wanting to cling into the old stuff. I liked these old disks that run on a diamond needle, it is simply cool to notice how it makes sound.
For the people, yes I will do what I could do to fix them up.

[Pokemon RED]

I cant see this surviving

Interesting. But I dont see it lasting.

MessiahClock responds:

your wrong, but thanks! :3

[(2005) Bungee Jumping!]

The previous guy is a moron

the problem with NG is people who vote5 based simply on the reputation of the animator.
They dont even watch the movie. Idiots.

I know claymation is a long process and I salute you for your effort. But as for what actually took place, i'm afraid I didn't find it very interesting. It was ok. Nicely made. But nothing special.

But I am sure you will get Movie of the Day/Week/Month and a score of 4+ thanks to your legions of mindless fans who vote5 without even watching.
I'm sure you personally would rather people voted based on your animation rather than your reputation. But I could be wrong.

Knox responds:

eh i dont really care

[Sonic movie madness final]

WHAT?

Haven't you already submitted this under a different name?
Submitting the same thing 100 times isn't going to do anything other than annoy people and get you lower scores

They all start exactly the same.

RogerregoRRoger responds:

thats why i asked to blam the first one.
mistake that newgrounsd uploaded the movie before i finished the upload form